The idea for Going After the Heart came from a nightmare I
had featuring myself and my husband.
Waking up feeling awful as some dreams have the power to do, I thought
I'd write down a couple of humorous aspects of the dream to help me get over
it. Feeling better, I thought I'd
eventually use the notes as scenes in a future story about something else
entirely. Then I started thinking about
the kind of people these situations would happen to. As their personalities took shape, the
moments leading up to the situations started to take form. And just like that, I had a plot to flush out
and characters to torture! = D
Have you ever had something start out as one thing and morph
into something else completely?
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Going After the Heart
Blurb:
Lizzy Bergstrum thought she finally reached a point in her
life when she could honestly say she had it all. A thriving writing career. A wonderful daughter. And a marriage to the love of her life. But looks can apparently be deceiving because
her husband just walked out on her and their eight year old daughter hates her.
Gavin Bergstrum can’t handle the direction his life has
taken. Not only did he get laid off from
his job, but his wife seems to barely remember he exists. Convinced he’s tried his best to change
things, he begins to wrestle with the possibility of divorce. But he can’t think straight in the same house
as Lizzy. Hating to leave his daughter,
but needing time to think and come to terms with what he feels he needs to do,
Gavin decides to return to his small home town in Oregon and stay at his family
ranch with his father and brothers.
In shock, Lizzy gives Gavin his space. But as time passes and he doesn’t say a word
about their marriage, Lizzy decides it’s past time she takes matters into her own
hands. Without a word, she follows Gavin
to Oregon.
Now facing a daughter who blames her for everything, an
irritated husband, and a small town that feeds on the drama, Lizzy finds
herself trying to figure out how to convince Gavin to give her another chance,
teach her daughter it takes two to make a successful marriage, and overcome her
own insecurities – all without compromising who she is.
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Excerpt:
“Here’s the keys to the cabin. The round one is to the front and back doors
and the square one is for the shed.”
Ray’s voice sounded clear and even behind him.
Turning, Gavin watched his father hand Lizzy a small set of
keys.
“I had Clare clean it up for you. Like I said on the phone, it’s not the newest
place in the world, but it’s still in pretty good shape considering its
age."
Lizzy gave his father a small smile as she took the keys
from him. “I’m sure it’s great.”
Her gaze moved to him and resentment swelled watching her
smile fade. Although, what did he
expect, she hadn’t smiled at him for months prior to him leaving. Why
would she start now?
But the indiscernible look settling on Lizzy’s features
startled him. After ten years of
marriage and five years together before getting married, Gavin would have bet
big money he knew every single one of his wife’s expressions. But this one, he realized dumbfounded, he
didn’t recognize.
Her gaze dropped down to Sky. “Come on, Sky, we’ve got to go up to the
cabin to settle in.”
Beside him, Gavin felt Sky’s shoulders tense.
“No!” She shouted the
word venomously. “I don’t want to go
with you,” she spat before turning
pleading blue eyes up at him. “Dad, can’t I stay here with you and Papa? I don’t want to go with her.”
Apparently he missed the memo about today being Surprise
Day, Gavin realized, as he could only stare at his daughter for a moment, never
having seen this side of her before.
“I tell you what, little missy, no little girl is welcome in
my house that sasses her mama the way you just did. No matter what injustice you think she’s
handed you, a child never speaks to their parent that way.” Ray delivered his little speech with an even
look and matching tone.
Sky’s cheeks turned bright red. Gavin frowned down at her. “Your grandfather’s right, you know better
than to talk to your mom that way.”
Looking up to his wife, he arched a brow. Apparently the statute of limitations for
surprises for the day hadn’t been reached yet, he thought silently in disbelief
when Lizzy didn’t scold, or even comment on, Sky’s behavior.
Rather than say anything, Lizzy looked away and her back
stiffened so much he thought her spine would snap.
What the hell is going
on? His bewilderment bothered him.
Seeing Lizzy wouldn’t say anything, Gavin looked back down
at Sky. “Honey, since I didn’t know you were coming, I don’t have anywhere set
up for you to sleep. I’m sleeping on a
cot in one of the extra rooms. I’ll try
to look at setting something up tomorrow so you can stay a few nights with
me. How does that sound?”
A stubborn look Gavin recognized all too easily surfaced on
Sky’s face, but she remained silent, temporarily mollified and nodded. Turning away from him, Sky made her way back
to the car and climbed in without so much as a single glance in her mother’s
direction.
Gavin returned his gaze back to Lizzy, but she completely
ignored him as she turned to climb back in the car.
That, at least, he’d grown used to.
Bio:
In between her to-be-read pile and trying to bring the
characters in her head alive, Kristen spends as much time as she can with
family and friends. Much to her
husband’s dismay, she enjoys collecting purses, shoes, and jewelry. During those rare times she’s not working at
her day job, rushing her daughters somewhere, watching movies with her husband,
and trying to meet a deadline, she can usually be found energetically cheering
for one of her favorite New York sports teams.
As with just about every other writer on the planet, Kristen
grew up an avid reader. She started with
young adult before she technically hit the age range and moved on to sci-fi
classics by Isaac Asimov and Ray Bradbury.
At fifteen, her best friend gave her a book she just had to read! The book
was Honest Illusions by Nora
Roberts. Always a sucker for a happy
ending, she was a goner and fell in love with the romance genre. Having started writing novel length stories
at the age of eleven, Kristen’s stories all took a romantic turn from that
point on.
You can connect with Kristen through her website: www.KristenBeairsto.com
Facebook: www.facebook.com/AuthorKristenBeairsto
Twitter: www.twitter.com/AuthorKBeairsto.
Very nice excerpt.
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DeleteGreat excerpt! Sounds like a great book :)
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DeleteThanks for stopping by and sharing an excerpt with us, Kristen. It does sound like a fab book. :-)
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